Treated Animals Fairly? (Writing Practice)

Treated Animals Fairly? (Writing Practice)

Question
A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employe animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Answer
Many people believe that human should treat the animal in the appropriate way. While other prefer to take only advantages from them, it is also undeniable that many others refuse to use them unfairly.

People have been in mutual relation with animal since ancient time. Some animals turn into friend with human. They live in one roof, eat together, and enjoy the quality time. Animals also provide basic food needs from human. Everybody consume meatball, fried chicken, and many others food which are distributed by animals. In addition, animal helps people in various hard jobs. They become a porter, help the farmer cultivate the land, accompany to hunt, and keep the home savely.

Although it seems people exploit the animals much, but people should still deal with the same good condition to animals. People have big responsible for animal life. For example people should feed the animal, supply daily needs, order them not in rude manner. Employing animals, however, can be exhausting sometimes, but people must do it in a very smooth way.

To sum up, I stand on the argument that humans need to give a satisfying feedback for animals working to them.

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Lidya Pawestri Ayuningtyas is an English lecturer, translator, and creative writer. An LPDP awardee, she holds an MA in TESOL Pre-service from University College London, a bachelor in English literature from University of Indonesia, and diploma degree from State Polytechnic of Jakarta where she is currently teaching.